Friday, January 11, 2019

32 Ways to Write About Fear -Guest Post

32 Ways To Write About Fear
Guest Blog by  Amanda Patterson

32 Ways To Write About Fear

How do we write about fear in an authentic way?
Fear is a vital response for human beings. If we didn’t feel fear, we couldn’t protect ourselves from threats. Our bodies and brains are wired to treat threats as life-threatening. This triggers an extreme fight-flight-or-freeze response.
Our fears are not solely dependent on instinctive responses. They are also shaped by our societies and cultures, which teach people when to fear and how much to fear.
Sometimes, our fear is unnecessary and we avoid doing things that could be beneficial to us. Sometimes, facing danger can result in lingering  responses that trigger us to act in a certain way, even when the risk is gone.
The same is true for the characters we create. When we write about fearful characters, we should remember to write about them in a realistic way.
Here are 32 things to consider when you write about fear:

A)  Physical Reactions

When we are afraid, we have these reactions:
  1. An accelerated breathing rate
  2. An accelerated heart rate
  3. Increased muscle tension
  4. Goose bumps
  5. Sweating
  6. Increased blood glucose
  7. Increased white blood cells
  8. Sleep disturbances
  9. Butterflies in the stomach
  10. Difficulty concentrating
  11. Difficulty swallowing
  12. Dizziness
All of these responses help us to survive by either running away or fighting. Use these physical reactions to show your character is afraid.

B)  Body Language

In your body language, signs of fear include:
  1. Hunching shoulders
  2. Shrinking away
  3. Open mouth
  4. Wide eyes
  5. Shaking
  6. Trembling
  7. Freezing
  8. Wrapping arms around oneself
  9. Shaking hands
  10. Rocking from side to side

C)  Rational Or Irrational?

  1. Fear is rational. It is a reasonable response to danger.
  2. Phobias are irrational. They are persistent, irrational fears of a specific object, activity, or situation that leads to a compelling desire to avoid it. Read: Writing About Characters With Phobias

D)   Ways to create conflict

There are three classic ways people respond to fear. They fight, flee, or freeze. Use these responses to create suspense in your book.
  1. Fight – choose when your characters would reasonably stay to confront the danger.
  2. Flight – choose when your character would reasonably choose to run away.
  3. Freeze – choose when your character would realistically become paralyzed with fear.
Use these three responses at different times to show different aspects of your character. Use them when they suit your plot.

E)  The Importance of Fear in Plotting

As a writer, you can use fear to move the plot forward in many ways:
  1. You can create a fearful situation to move a plot forward.
  2. You can literally change the setting by making characters move to avoid a threat.
  3. You can increase or decrease the pace of a story by introducing a threat.
  4. You can show another facet of the character in the way he or she reacts to fear.
  5. You can use it to show growth. Characters can look at the way fear made them act and change their behaviour.
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© Amanda Patterson
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Elva Martin
Elva Cobb Martin is vice-president of the South Carolina Chapter of American Christian Fiction Writers. She is a former school teacher and a graduate of Anderson University and Erskine College. She has two inspirational novels published with Lighthouse Publishers of the Carolinas. Summer of Deception, a contemporary romantic suspense, and an historical romance, In a Pirate’s Debt. Both have spent time on Amazon’s 100 Best Sellers List for Women’s Religious Fiction. She has indie published a Bible study on Amazon, Power Over Satan, on the  believer's authority in Christ. Decision, Charisma, and Home Life have carried Elva's articles. She and her husband Dwayne are semi-retired ministers. A mother and grandmother, Elva lives in South Carolina. Connect with her on her web site,on Twitter; Facebook;  and Pinterest    
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